Really good!! Has a good back bone of a story and the animation with the expressions works alot. You did great, and you put effort into this story! =)
Great animation but you need to back it up whats going on. I try to make sense of it though, but only sense I could think of was that sometimes things are never meant to be and its left to rot.
Very touching, Felt it in the heart and very sweet.
I really like the game, its fun, and gets me jumping with new tricks on traps. I love how you put in the crazy dudes hilarious.
I gave it a full 10 because of the art and how you handle the lighting and the gripping of the sword, pretty cool. I do notice though your not suppose to handle you thumb around across the fingers, and the pinky suppose to extend out a bit when handling a sword even for the Wakazashi. the thumb and the pinky serves for its thrust purpose. Not to insult your drawing, its how experience people hold swords. Its like your throwing a spear handling, but your not throwing it, but also extends the sword as well make a clean cut.
The hands feels like it give out pain. Maybe you could make him tilt a little, but everything else in the art looks awesome. Is he getting ready to arise from his chair? Why I'm wondering if he's getting ready to stand up straight.
I love how you use the lighting effect. The lighting gives some alive touch. I like how you made the reaper how it leans and give some energy with the hand swerve with the remote, and him nodding what channel to watch.
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